Old Age/Cold Water

November 23, 2012

Written by: Jason Ribadeneyra

Old Age/Cold Water


Greetings from the South Pole.

All is well?

I thought so…

Shut the lights!

Shut the door!

Hotel, Motel, Holiday Inn.

I finally found myself with those great slit wrists.

Looks like my plans feel through.

 I was thinking.

I was thinking that I wont know

for sure.  Can’t fake amends.

There’s no more vacations now.

Only Hollywood breathes in the the end.


were all part of the problem.

No such thing as a vacation, I know.

I’m scared because I’m part of the problem.

 Looks like they took my friend and

looks like my plans fell through.


Jasen Ribadenera

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